with pens and swords and pennies to spare,
I walk into this world of tears.
oh yes, these kisses we exchanged beneath the mistletoe,
these breaths we take being scarce but fulfilling.
promises we’ll only make to each other,
in those dark hours, between the silken sheets.
I turn to watch the sun go down,
you hold me closer to yourself.
I wish this dream won’t end,
with pens and swords and pennies to spare.
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yesterday, I was just sitting waiting for a friend to come online, when I typed out a few lines. I love the way they turned out. they sound good, say what I mean and seem grammatically okay.
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"you hit upon genius when you least expect to and then cannot recover the greatness"?
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Alias ~tusharm
i love this piece. i don't think i have ever come up with something better. so, what narcissism? we all have that one particular piece that we love the best, don't we? i am hoping i am allowed the liberty to have one, too.
anyways, glad to see you comment.
and thanks for the opinion!
take care..hope all is good...
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it brings a lot of images to mind and forces you to think and (best of all) they'll mean something different every time.
where is the narcissim?
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De temps en temps,
Le Bon Dieu rit a me voir
i love the first line too!!
take care and thanks for reading!
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non technical comments :
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Haven't you sometimes wished you could just die?
Well, don't worry, I wish you would die too...
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Human Relationships are like Pickles...Some of them Mature and Some just go Sour.
I think it's beautiful honestly, in it's simplicity. The second and third stanzas are what I love the most, what attracts me to it. I'm glad you posted this, going to favorite it. (BTW I do like the first and last lines alot, just not sure how they fit)
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Fighting for peace is like F'ing for virginity.
take care!
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